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The One Who Knocks

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 12:58 pm
by v_man
Hello community !
I'm new on here, you can call me V_man.
I've been working on this breaking bad deck, I'm also working on a Game of thrones one but I want to show you this one first.
It'd be nice if I have your opinion on it, if you'd like me to finish it, and if you think it would make it on Kickstarter.
Please give me some feedback since it's the first one I'd like to launch.

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V_man

Re: The One Who Knocks

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 1:00 pm
by 4.of.Clubs
Common issue with these are the copy rights issues. Have you looked into those?

Re: The One Who Knocks

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 1:08 pm
by v_man
4.of.Clubs wrote:Common issue with these are the copy rights issues. Have you looked into those?
I don't think there's a problem as long as I don't write "Breaking Bad" anywhere. The actors are public figures so it shouldn't be a deal. It's different with cartoons and videogames since those are completely creative creation.

Re: The One Who Knocks

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 7:00 pm
by gotmagic
v_man wrote:
4.of.Clubs wrote:Common issue with these are the copy rights issues. Have you looked into those?
I don't think there's a problem as long as I don't write "Breaking Bad" anywhere. The actors are public figures so it shouldn't be a deal. It's different with cartoons and videogames since those are completely creative creation.
The actors are public figures however if you are going with USPCC you need to have written permission from the actors or producer. Do some research into copyright laws so you don't have to waste your time. I do like the design. Did you know there is already a breaking bad deck out?

Re: The One Who Knocks

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 7:09 pm
by Justin O.
Love the Chemical Table Index, great way to make it thematically appropriate without changing the actual letter too much
Not as happy about the court bodies, would like to see them be a little more traditional, and I might recommend KoS's boiling flask look more like a boiling flask than a pipe, my first reaction was 'wait a minute, Walter didn't smoke...
Do you have a card back image yet?
Like this more than a lot of the other BB decks I have seen so far, would love to see more

Re: The One Who Knocks

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2016 11:11 pm
by sprouts1115
I still say the club and spade look to similar. Make the club more distinct. It looks to similar to the spade...

Re: The One Who Knocks

Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2016 12:16 pm
by RichK
Is all the yellow/red a reference to Los Pollos Hermanos? Looks very Mexican in colors to me.

Re: The One Who Knocks

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2016 1:40 pm
by v_man
Hey guys! thanks for all the answers. I'll take them in consideration.
Answering some of the questions...
No, no reference to pollos hermanos but it was funny when I read it lol.
Yea, I saw the other decks but still wanted one on my style, I'm stubborn
I don't have the back yet, but give me a few more days and I'll show you one