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"New Card" All Roses

Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:16 pm
by counting-the-cards
I am starting this thread to try to get some positive feedback about the design and direction of a new card design that I would like to release on kickstarter. Some of you already know me because of my last disaster. I am not going to launch this project until I can make most people happy. I am a graphic designer and have been, but not a professional cardist, but I am working very hard to understand! Below is what I have so far. I am willing to work on and change almost anything except the hand painted design that I did in acrylic paint. I could also use some main theme ideas. I want to change it from black stone to something else and remove the stone and setting. I need some help! Thanks.
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Kickstarter preview link
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/un ... n=fddf06fc

Re: "New Card" development concept. "No Name"

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:36 pm
by montecarlojoe
Well if you take away the stone and setting what do you have?

A quite nice floral design borrowing from art neuveau and baroque influence, butnot much else. I think you have a solid eye, but need to find direction.

Actually there hasn't been a really good deck that captures Art Neuveau (for me anyway). Look up the Four Seasons by Alfons Mucha and tell me they aren't a set of perfect queens!

Re: "New Card" development concept. "No Name"

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2015 11:52 am
by counting-the-cards
Looking to replace the stone and setting with something else. Had some negative feedback!
You are quite right about the image below by Alfons Mucha.
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While replying to this post I was sitting here looking at my screen icon. It is quite disturbing!!!

Re: "New Card" development concept. "No Name"

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2015 4:08 pm
by counting-the-cards
Here is the latest Version
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Re: "New Card" development concept. "No Name"

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 1:25 pm
by SeanWhelan
The back design is very blurry