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Opinions on my playing card design
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 8:03 pm
by AzzoBoxHead
Looking to star a kickstarter soon looking for opinions on my back design update design colours
Re: Opinions on my playing card design
Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2024 10:42 pm
by Honeybee
Although I have commented on Reddit, this forum is my preferred forum so I will reply here.
Questioning the relevance of the eyes to the lavender deck - I can't agree with the answer that they make the design look good
Re: Opinions on my playing card design
Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2024 3:17 pm
by wingedpotato
Pretty and elegant, I like it overall. Here are some impressions: 1) The black is too hard to see against the dark purple. I like the purple, so I'd change the black 2) The lavender itself is too detailed and looks clipart-y against the rest of the CAD linework 3) the star in the middle feels a little empty of detail 4) the hashed white lines on the sides don't do much for me and feel like they were thrown in to deal with negative space 5) agree the eye is kinda random. Hope that helps!
Re: Opinions on my playing card design
Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2024 5:45 pm
by Honeybee
All excellent points wp. I think it would be misleading and of no help to the OP to say anything other than that the back needs a lot of work - then we will need to see some custom courts
Re: Opinions on my playing card design
Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2024 7:00 pm
by Evilgamer
I agree we need to see more what the theme of the deck is.
Im not a huge fan of the back design and I agree now that its pointed out that the eye is just weird.
Re: Opinions on my playing card design
Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2024 7:06 pm
by AzzoBoxHead
wingedpotato wrote: ↑Wed Feb 07, 2024 3:17 pm
Pretty and elegant, I like it overall. Here are some impressions: 1) The black is too hard to see against the dark purple. I like the purple, so I'd change the black 2) The lavender itself is too detailed and looks clipart-y against the rest of the CAD linework 3) the star in the middle feels a little empty of detail 4) the hashed white lines on the sides don't do much for me and feel like they were thrown in to deal with negative space 5) agree the eye is kinda random. Hope that helps!
the lavender will stay on the back design the eye can be changed with the colors what colors would you recommend
Re: Opinions on my playing card design
Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2024 11:15 am
by wingedpotato
I'm not a designer per se, but I'd try changing the black (indigo?) lines to the same lavender/light purple you use on the eight floral icons.