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:: SHORT ::

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 12:30 pm
by Mirror
I decided to do a series of short cardistry clips and here's the first one :)


Re: :: SHORT ::

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 12:46 pm
by MagikFingerz
Nice and simple video with well executed flourishes at a perfect pace (in my viewing experience anyway). Good work :)

Only thing I would criticize is capturing the springs better on camera, which I certainly understand is a bit of a challenge.

Re: :: SHORT ::

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 1:46 pm
by Mirror
I'm glad to get feedback :)

Re: :: SHORT ::

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 9:54 pm
by Yousaf
Mirror wrote:I decided to do a series of short cardistry clips and here's the first one :)


Nice Job!

But here's some constructive criticism!

1. Flow- Work on your flow, you might know the moves and you might do them well, but, that doesn't mean every sequence flows and looks smooth.

2. Fidgety- Again, relating to Flow and smoothness, dont fidget and square the deck so much. :)

Constructive Criticism doesn't mean all the things your'e doing wrong!

Here's some things I liked!

Pretty Short- I don't like watching long card videos.......... this was the perfect limit. Short and Sweet

Style- Nice play on style. I like it. Keep at it :)


Don't take anything I said as hate. Grow with it. :)

/// Y:E ///

Re: :: SHORT ::

Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:48 am
by Mirror
Yousaf wrote:
Mirror wrote:
Nice Job!

But here's some constructive criticism!

1. Flow- Work on your flow, you might know the moves and you might do them well, but, that doesn't mean every sequence flows and looks smooth.

2. Fidgety- Again, relating to Flow and smoothness, dont fidget and square the deck so much. :)

Constructive Criticism doesn't mean all the things your'e doing wrong!

Here's some things I liked!

Pretty Short- I don't like watching long card videos.......... this was the perfect limit. Short and Sweet

Style- Nice play on style. I like it. Keep at it :)


Don't take anything I said as hate. Grow with it. :)

/// Y:E ///
Thank you. I really appreciate constructive criticism :)