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Nice and simple video with well executed flourishes at a perfect pace (in my viewing experience anyway). Good work
Only thing I would criticize is capturing the springs better on camera, which I certainly understand is a bit of a challenge.
Only thing I would criticize is capturing the springs better on camera, which I certainly understand is a bit of a challenge.
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Mirror wrote:I decided to do a series of short cardistry clips and here's the first one
Nice Job!
But here's some constructive criticism!
1. Flow- Work on your flow, you might know the moves and you might do them well, but, that doesn't mean every sequence flows and looks smooth.
2. Fidgety- Again, relating to Flow and smoothness, dont fidget and square the deck so much.
Constructive Criticism doesn't mean all the things your'e doing wrong!
Here's some things I liked!
Pretty Short- I don't like watching long card videos.......... this was the perfect limit. Short and Sweet
Style- Nice play on style. I like it. Keep at it
Don't take anything I said as hate. Grow with it.
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Thank you. I really appreciate constructive criticismYousaf wrote:Mirror wrote:
Nice Job!
But here's some constructive criticism!
1. Flow- Work on your flow, you might know the moves and you might do them well, but, that doesn't mean every sequence flows and looks smooth.
2. Fidgety- Again, relating to Flow and smoothness, dont fidget and square the deck so much.
Constructive Criticism doesn't mean all the things your'e doing wrong!
Here's some things I liked!
Pretty Short- I don't like watching long card videos.......... this was the perfect limit. Short and Sweet
Style- Nice play on style. I like it. Keep at it
Don't take anything I said as hate. Grow with it.
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